All Comments on 'A Genie for Frank Ch. 05'

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Casextra44Casextra44about 4 years ago

Thank you for continuing the story!!!!!!! I was hoping it'd continue! You have brightened my day immeasurably!!!! Story is going strong and I can't wait to red what happens back in the office, or wherever you send Frank off to next!!

Thanks for writing!!!!!!!

desirelitdesirelitover 3 years agoAuthor
Thanks so much for your comment

Thank for your comment. It's very encouraging!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
The idea of a silly comedy fantasy is just fantastic

(And a growing harem would be wonderful too.. )

Your writing style is really good! This is the first time I ever submit a comment

MarkT63MarkT63almost 3 years ago

Enjoying the harem aspect!!! Will be hard to keep wife fooled. What happened to the 5 women in the office? He fucked 2 only?

mlrsdpicmmlrsdpicmabout 1 year ago

The threes company was unneeded. Better use of time getting his wife to know she needed other women to curb his libido. So that his three could show themselves.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

The threes company part was distracting at best. Total diversion from the story line.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

and there i totally lost interest. I recognize the idea with a dream of an 70s show but everything else is just unnessecary to read. Was hoping that there will be any story comming, but obviously the story died with the 4-women office and 2.geenie / slave without any explanation or shadding some light into the motivation. Don't need to finish reading this chapter or that story at all.

ClearmuseClearmuse16 days ago

Now that's a weird funny throwback lul

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