All Comments on 'A Girl on the Bus Pt. 03'

Part 03 is wet!

The rhythm of human relationships is incredibly accurate.The rise, the flow, and perhaps the eventual fall? Between it all, the tension, anticipation, and romance of getting to know a complete stranger; all executed with flawless writing. I'm sorry some readers missed your foreword in earlier chapters. Even casual sex has a lead-in, a buildup to the climax. This story isn't about the sex...(at least not yet). It's about how 'stuff happens' in life. By the implied rules of writing, you were never required to have the skills of a cartographer as well. Just keep doing what you do best, EB; it's working for those of us who understand what your writing is about. As a variance of opinion, I thought this was the best of the three installments so far.

I adore this series, so gentle so precise yet so anticipatory. I want to work in your building so you can sketch my life in such short delicate pointed word strokes. I look forward to the unfolding.

So stark. So real. So clear that there are no guarantees in this world.

Like leaving bread crumbs... I'll follow your trail. xox