All Comments on 'A Happy Slave'

More back ground details please and keep writing.

Noted. Thank you for your feedback.

You brought out the safety and backup plans for her trip into servitude that is normally ignored. The first interaction involving the tree trunk was inspirational and turned the tale into a love story.

Well done.

Establishing the rules for relationships like these, I think helps to humanize the characters, as well as make people realize that such a thing can be normal.

I suppose it could have been longer in some regards, but I meant it to be a concise account, and I knew I had to include the stump scene. I'm glad you enjoyed it!