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lv2travel2lv2travel2about 3 years ago

I ceased reading following page one because I found the writer's attempt to impress the reader's with h/her command of the English language boring and so unnecessary. I opted to read this story for eroticism and not to evaluate someone's Master's thesis. I recall many English teachers explaining the importance of writing in a manner that conducive for the reader; a lesson this writer has forgotten at least in the chapter I attempted to read.

zackjackzackjackabout 3 years agoAuthor

In that case, I find it fortuitous that you ceased following page one. Thanks for the comment: I'll learn from it. ZJ.

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The quill is mightier than the sword, and metamorphosis is the Spice of Life. In a present state of ecdysis, wing-spreading will ensue. Stay tuned...

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