All Comments on 'A Hot Summer's Night Ch. 03 - Illustrated'

I have to commend you on your wonderful illustrations and the sex scene was absolutely great between both siblings with his wife watching. However, as having another guy in a relationship with them is really not my thing, I have to admit that I really didn't like the ending and where it is going. I would have loved to see a scene between his wife, sister and himself, but I think it will sadly devolve into another orgy thing. Of course, that is just my views and I get that we don't have at all the same opinion there, seeing as it is a huge turn off for me to see two guys naked together ( and yes I am a female ^^ ).

I would say that it was pretty exciting while it lasted, and it told me a lot about my own fantasies, but I will have, to my regret, to stop after this one as I am really not into including another guy ( again it is weird for me to basically have a typical guy's fantasy, but I can't help it ), and I wish you good luck in your future endeavours !

Top quality animation and super hot story.. hoping to see a similar chapter in the latina housewife series as well

graphics so good I have yet to read story. 5 stars for graphics

I actually do not know where the story will lead until I start building it. I have a number of ideas and whatever feels the best I will work on, so I do take suggestions. I think an interplay between the three of them will be next.

Outstanding job I have been around here for many years and I have to say this is the best illustrated story I have ever read on literotica, or anywhere else. Keep it up, we want more. 5 stars!!!!

What comes after astounding? I'm sure I don't know.

So yes. Each chapter is well worth the wait, and I will wait.

Excellent seems so insignificant a word to describe what you have done.

I thank you.

After reading your prequel, definitely add in Brad & Val's cousin Julie to the mix and then her brother. Then during a girls night out have Jody join Julie, Jaime and Val in a lesbian four way with the girls convincing Jody to get a divorce, possibly after finding her husband cheating on her with a woman from his work. Then add in Jaime's sister (please make her single) with her first pulling a train in a lesbian five way and then eating Brad's cum out of her sister Jaime's pussy while Brad fucks her. Add in some ass play with some double penetration with one of the gals using the strap-on or Brad and his cousin double teaming the girls, or better yet make them airtight with the strap-on being used as a third cock.

Nop

Not

believable!

The story is erotic and engaging! The renders show skill and patience! Keep up the good work.

I use Daz 3D so i know the effort it takes to get a realistic, well lit render~

Great story and fabulous pictures. I can't wait for the next installment when wife get's involved with both brother and sister. You are up there with Stocking lover stories. Keep up the great work.

Excellent story and graphics! Keep up the good work!

So well written and such graphic pictures and words! Never enough - and even more potential fucking! YES! A true tension relieving series! OMGG!!!!

Amazing job. Keep it up!

Really good and hot story. I really loved the pictures. They alone kept me hard and added to the story I really enjoyed myself. More please Sir.

Your illustrations are the hottest and most realistic drawings I've seen on this website. Coupled with your smoking hot writing, I think this story will end up in the Hall of Fame for the Illustrated category. Five stars and a favorite point!

Great story, penis-straining pictures!

You started you put a lot of effort into learning the illustration program, and it shows. Fantastic improvement from the first to second chapter. You are destined to dominate this category. Keep up the good work.

The graphics are a wonderful addition to your story. More!!

Illustration and story are awesome.

I wasn’t sure about the incest side of things but one must make an informed opinion so I read the 1st one the the 2nd, then 3rd.

Excellent story, and the illustrations were perfect with the narrative.

Hugely entertaining

I hope it goes on a long time.

I just love your illustrations.

Do you explain somewhere what you use and how you use it?

Awesome illustrations. Keep it up

Does ch . 2 have an illustrated version ?

Somebody said,"nope, not believable.". This is what I find so unbelievable

Imagine a man reading great fantasy and looking for reality! Wow!

Great writing. Please keep at it.

1. Story is great, especially at the high level of caring.

2. Good growth of relation with Val.

3. Good that Jaime was turned on and liked husband's fucking with his sister, Val.

4. Enticing possibility of cousin and wife's fucking with cousin.

5. Future: get Val and Jaime sex with each other BEFORE cousin arrives.

6. Then husband, Val and Jaime.

7. Then Jaime and cousin while Val and husband watch.

Graphics

Perfect graphics both as skill and as clear portrayal of emothions.

Write more.

great illustrations, such great quality

the illustrations add so much detail to the story, my fantasies now include Brad's insatiable monster driving me crazy.

Absolutely amazing

Loving this series, an appreciate the effort put into those renders as starting to use DAZ myself. Those are good ones your have done, and think they add to the story.

Very nice, I think I got the idea now.

A great story of family play along with awesome graphis.

Excellent graphics that amp up the text. Figures are impressively life-like.