by Love_TKO
Please continue, as there's a good foundation for an on-going, expanding story. I also like the present to past and back to present referencing, providing the supporting background for the future relationship that develops.
Thanks Mikey for the constructive feedback! For a new author this is very encouraging. Chapter 3 will be out soon, and I can guarantee that the story grows, with another jump through time. Enjoy!
Good start nice beginning be nice for you to continue so many way's you can take this my wife is a midwife and I run a construction company and nobody knows our chastity secret