All Comments on 'A Hot Wife for Richard Ch. 02'

by Love_TKO

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TotallysexTotallysexabout 2 years ago

As I said : its a long way home .....

mikeylistensmikeylistensabout 2 years ago

Please continue, as there's a good foundation for an on-going, expanding story. I also like the present to past and back to present referencing, providing the supporting background for the future relationship that develops.

Love_TKOLove_TKOabout 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks Mikey for the constructive feedback! For a new author this is very encouraging. Chapter 3 will be out soon, and I can guarantee that the story grows, with another jump through time. Enjoy!

stevehal1stevehal1about 2 years ago

Good start nice beginning be nice for you to continue so many way's you can take this my wife is a midwife and I run a construction company and nobody knows our chastity secret

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Long-time reader, first-time contributor. I would appreciate any constructive feedback. Happy reading!