All Comments on 'A House Full of Women Ch. 06'

I would have preferred that you kept this one strictly Jack's harem, especially considering the title that you chose. Considering that there are NO COMMENTS before mine, I'm guessing that a good majority of the readers who previously liked this series decided to bail out at this point. I really can't blame them.

The biggest failure here was putting the cart in front of the horse. The conversation with Joanna should have happened BEFORE Vanessa slept with Sullivan.

I'll give you a 2/5. But I'm moving on to something else. I'm not enjoying anything about this story anymore plus I have an intuitive feeling that you're going to have Sullivan and Jack go bisexual really soon. Definitely better than BDSM, but still something that I have no interest in reading about. 😠 ST out!