by La_Reina
You're trying hard but it's just not working. The characters are a liitle 2d cartoonish and the bad guy is a cliche.
Would you please please please please please write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I read this looking for something to get me going. The thought of this happening to me has me soaked and so close i don't think it would take but blpwing on my clit to make me cum! Thank you ;) please write more!