All Comments on 'A King's Legacy Ch. 20-21'

by PupBayou

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geemeedeegeemeedeeabout 1 year ago
Well, I just sobbed like a little bitch

This is one of the best things I’ve ever read in my 12+ years on this site. I saw all of it, like I was watching a movie.

PupBayouPupBayouabout 1 year agoAuthor

Thrilled to hear you liked it so much! Honestly, the first few reviews for this chapter got me down a bit, but the explosion of love for this one in the last two days has really humbled me. I put a lot of effort into making this one right, to make sure I honored Mollis in the way I needed to. I hope you enjoy what comes after! Thanks for the awesome review and for reading!

Heifel78Heifel78about 1 year ago

Really well written! And both a beautiful and sad ending for Mollis. The way you described the battle made it into a film in my head. Would give more than 5 stars if possible.

PupBayouPupBayouabout 1 year agoAuthor

Thank you so much! I put a lot of time into this chapter. I appreciate the vote and review! Should have the next chapter up soon, just wanted to rest a bit.

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Just a gay pup that likes writing. Always happy to hear feedback! Feel free to message if you have any questions! I do have a discord for the King's Legacy Chronicles, and I'll be posting some exclusive stuff there before it hits print!

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