All Comments on 'A Little Help'

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King_MacAulayKing_MacAulayabout 2 years ago

Beautifully erotic and romantic in a setting I never would have thought of.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

THANK YOU for a very interesting read. I feel that a backstory would be well received!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Interesting. At first, I almost felt like her, it was conveyed so well. Then it got kinda weird.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This needs to be a story series. Background, how things were before, when she could feel, if there was ever a time, what they did before evolving into what has happened here and then continuation…. Love it. 5 stars

lc69hunterlc69hunterover 1 year ago

We need the back story

LilacQueen15LilacQueen15over 1 year ago

Keeping his eyes on his wife was an insult to the woman in his arms.

unclemerv77unclemerv7710 months ago

this is a very sad story. your wife is paraplegic

djripdjrip7 months ago

This is like when an artist just flicks two or three flecks of paint onto the canvas at the end and all of a sudden a whole scene materializes from the vague washes of color laid down already.

joy_of_cookingjoy_of_cooking7 months ago

Fantastic premise, great execution, horrible title and description. I done know how many times I scrolled past this one in your list of submissions, my interest un-piqued. So glad I finally read it. Five stars, needles to say.

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