All Comments on 'A Little Naive'

Your story is crude and boring. Don't quit your day job.

The previous poster (who called the story "crude and boring") obviously lives in a universe where the guy always gets laid and the woman lies back and enjoys it, period -no emotional involvement or blackmail

Not sure what world he lives in - not this one for sure

Hello Anerki

I read your story and found it very interesting. Usually stories on this site are about slutty or highly experienced individuals having sex in ways that seem either unbelievable or highly contrived.

Your story was a refreshing change to that and seemed to be a highly believable first time experience of a naive young girl.

Although your style could do with improving the content was very good and I would like to see more like this.