by Diamondbarrow
Well written, well played. As someone else said, you are a tease, but that's not a bad thing. :D I love your writing style and I'm looking forward to more. Kisses! ~Minx
I heard through the discussion board that this was just a small part of a greater story. You are an excellent writer! I look forward to seeing more of this tale, as I'm sure it is as exciting as this small snippit was!
This was good. It flowed. It was so smooth. Very erotic. I enjoyed it.
It's not easy writing from a woman's point of view. Very nicely done...
Thanks for sharing your fantasy (or a bit) with us. You are a skilled author. Very detailed story. Please keep sharing with us.