All Comments on 'A Love Scene'

Thanks for sharing your fantasy (or a bit) with us. You are a skilled author. Very detailed story. Please keep sharing with us.

It's not easy writing from a woman's point of view. Very nicely done...

This was good. It flowed. It was so smooth. Very erotic. I enjoyed it.

I heard through the discussion board that this was just a small part of a greater story. You are an excellent writer! I look forward to seeing more of this tale, as I'm sure it is as exciting as this small snippit was!

Well written, well played. As someone else said, you are a tease, but that's not a bad thing. :D I love your writing style and I'm looking forward to more. Kisses! ~Minx