All Comments on 'A Love Story Pt. 04'

Grammatical and spelling errors abound in what should have been an excellent chapter in this ongoing love story. A spell check and Grammarly (free) would certainly help.

I have to agree with the previous comments. A little more time with spell check and another editing tool would vastly improve the enjoyment of the story. As it was, I just couldn't get all the way through it. I won't read another chapter unless I can get at least four paragraphs in and find far fewer errors.

I use Grammarly(free) to edit my story. I tried very hard to make it right. I will do better in the future.