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Click hereOlive and Jay finally collapse onto each other, spent of their sexes, holding onto each other as they fell asleep.
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cruiser5050over 3 years agoAuthorI use Grammarly(free) to edit my story. I tried very hard to make it right. I will do better in the future.
Anonymousover 3 years agoI have to agree with the previous comments. A little more time with spell check and another editing tool would vastly improve the enjoyment of the story. As it was, I just couldn't get all the way through it. I won't read another chapter unless I can get at least four paragraphs in and find far fewer errors.
Anonymousover 3 years agoGrammatical and spelling errors abound in what should have been an excellent chapter in this ongoing love story. A spell check and Grammarly (free) would certainly help.
