All Comments on 'A loving husband'

Quite good but needs an editor.

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Sounds incredible. Hope it was real.

I enjoyed this read. Nice twist to the usual cuck stories. Hope to read more of these. Maybe have Amy search for the next playmate. She could be a buxom black gal or a tiny cute Asian for diversity. Happy writing.

Very hot scene. If only it were well written, it would be a 5 instead of a 4.

Love the story. Something I’ve fantasized about doing. Hopefully they repeated

Great little story with just a twist of difference. Difficult to read as the grammar is poor and the construction is a little naïve. I’m surprised you found a program which didn’t autocorrect your ‘i’s to ‘I’. All this matters as it makes your stories more enjoyable. If you can get an editor, it’s the fastest way to learn. If not, use Word or Google Docs and Grammarly. Keep writing.