All Comments on 'A Mistress and Her Slave Ch. 06'

by MistressTrinityJones

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GirlyclarkGirlyclarkalmost 7 years ago
Good but

Good but I would rather slave be on the receiving end of Laurel's crop and sadistic nature, but I feel this may change. Please, continue on with your writing, just some encouragement for what I would like to have if I were in Jared's position. Oh, but to have to please two pretty wet and devious mistresses.

jott50jott50over 9 years ago

OH MY GAWD!!!! well i guess that answers how her sister will be treated in the story

ifoifoifoifoalmost 11 years ago
Good but...

Not sure about the forced rape though. I get it: people find the idea of rapeing, and being raped very erotic - which it is, with proper safe words and some kind of prior consent. But this is straight illegal rape which I do find a little distasteful. Let's see if it gets better.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
does not spare

It is gratifying to see that my favourite mistress does not spare even her sister

EpixrysonEpixrysonabout 11 years ago
I liked this chapter

but I would have preferred Jared not being very enthusiastic about fucking Lydia for his own satisfaction, but doing it only because it would please his mistress, since he loves her.

Thanks again for sharing your story.

TimesarrowTimesarrowabout 11 years ago
a lovely twist

You have my rapt attention. This is superb. Had to add you as a 'favorite'!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Wow, just like that this story has taken on a whole new look.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
This is getting better!

With these last 2 chapters, this story has taken a turn for the better! More please!

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