All Comments on 'A Moment of Weakness'

by pantyguy301

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Please...use grammar check as well as spell check and read the draft several times slowly before you publish. This was a nightmare read when it could have been an awesome story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
grammar was bad...but...

it was a hot story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Just horrible

You REALLY need an editor. This was all but unreadable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Finnish the fucking story cunt

I want to see this guy get some pay back. That's jail time for all the sluts snd rapist assholesA678

xiaodanxiaodanover 5 years ago
is this a madlibs ?

dude, proof read !

interesting concept, feels rushed and seriously difficult to read with all the missing words.

good effort, good concept.

breakineggsbreakineggsabout 1 year ago

The grammar was a little rough but the story was hot and fun. Thanks for sharing this.

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