by pantyguy301
The grammar was a little rough but the story was hot and fun. Thanks for sharing this.
dude, proof read !
interesting concept, feels rushed and seriously difficult to read with all the missing words.
good effort, good concept.
I want to see this guy get some pay back. That's jail time for all the sluts snd rapist assholesA678
Please...use grammar check as well as spell check and read the draft several times slowly before you publish. This was a nightmare read when it could have been an awesome story.