All Comments on 'A Mother's Luxuries Ch. 18'

I’ve followed this story but where does this fit in? You’re either in the middle of a sentence or the story is over.

Sad. Lisa dad was sad. I'm glad Gregory went but that Lisa convinced her mom because he would have killed her too.

You trying too hard to end each short chapter on a cliffhanger ending, which is making the writing very broken and awkward to read.