All Comments on 'A New Beginning Ch. 03'

by KiryusAna

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Great Story

Another Great Part, can’t wait for Chapter 4

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Great Story

I really enjoyed this story. Your style of writing is excellent; the story was romantic but never lost the concept of being a slave story. I hope you will write more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Odd?

He can afford to buy a slave but only has one set of bedding??

KiryusAnaKiryusAnaabout 4 years agoAuthor
..Good Observation

Honestly I hadn't even thought about it, but in reality you are right, that is very odd. In reality, the punishment and everything was due to her 'disobedience' not so much that he really cared about the bedding, but you are right. I should have done better, and I hope you'll accept my apology for the oversight..

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Just a girl writing stories about her fantasies. My content will consist mainly of power exchange and rough BDSM themes along with Sexual Slavery. If this entices you, I am glad and I hope you enjoy it! (Any stories involving Ana and Kiryu share credit with my (former) Master...

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