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james_38671james_38671about 11 years ago
wow

so hot , iwoud love to be the dark one' s slave to serve her cock daily as she desires

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Details left out. Why?

We are skipping over the details of his time with the Majin. I think that you should have given more details on it since in earlier parts of the story, you made such an importance for the Majin to take Tommy's virginity. Do you plan on describing the details in the next chapter? There should be some way for Tommy to get his freedom or to get some magic of his own to protect him self.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Awesome

I love this series and this is one of the best chapters yet, (my favorite was the third one)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Amazing pleas continue

Michael56SmithMichael56Smithover 5 years ago
Well written and sexy, but,...

I am not a fan of BDSM, that said, I see the need for stress/conflict in the story, and I am hoping for some way for Tommy to get out of this sex slave predicament.

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