by alwaysreadyfryou
so hot , iwoud love to be the dark one' s slave to serve her cock daily as she desires
We are skipping over the details of his time with the Majin. I think that you should have given more details on it since in earlier parts of the story, you made such an importance for the Majin to take Tommy's virginity. Do you plan on describing the details in the next chapter? There should be some way for Tommy to get his freedom or to get some magic of his own to protect him self.
I love this series and this is one of the best chapters yet, (my favorite was the third one)
I am not a fan of BDSM, that said, I see the need for stress/conflict in the story, and I am hoping for some way for Tommy to get out of this sex slave predicament.