All Comments on 'A New Living Situation Ch. 03'

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hisangelbeautyhisangelbeautyalmost 13 years ago
hmm

got a little odd atthe end there but great story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Whoa... Love it

Love it. I just hope Alex's sense of ownership is because he is starting to fell something for her. I like him but that would change with one read if he turns out to be a sick freak.

LoneStarRiderLoneStarRideralmost 13 years ago
Ruht Ro, George

Yeah......probably not the best move to call your "sexual employer" by the wrong name.

Good chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
*****

Five.

honeybreehoneybreealmost 13 years ago
Interesting but missing something...

I agree it did get a little weird at the end overall it is still a good story but something is missing. If I can make a suggestion I think you should make Bella and Alex interact more than inside of the bedroom on a sexual level. I mean if she had been living there two weeks something had to change base on your writing, I mean if it was an arrangement why is he hurt all of a sudden? I think you need to expand on that a bit more.

kelleigh0127kelleigh0127almost 13 years ago
I knew someone would get caught up.

I knew someone would get caught up I just didn't think it would be Alex. I get the feeling Bella is going to find out if Rick is a better lay or not. If she does serves Alex right. He had gotten his payment every night and there agreement was for only 4 times a months. Alex's rules not Bella's...lmao

mariasmdmariasmdalmost 13 years ago
umm

i knew someone would get caught up too. if a white man told me he wanted to own me, i think i would be put off too. actually nay men for that matter... but eh it's fiction. food read, but too short.

foxxylady5foxxylady5almost 13 years ago
a new living situation

love this story keep it up and keep it coming fast thank u lol

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Good stuff

Normally I dont like these short clipped stories because I want the long winded Jane Eyre type interracial romances but since i'm short on time and sleep this is exactly what I need and can handle right now. I'm liking possesive Alex and I hope it continues in that vain. Cant wait to read your other stories...

ChynaMarieChynaMariealmost 13 years ago
so....

I LOVE THESE STORIES....update soon..lol

I know it takes me TO LONG TO update, but now i know how my readers feel...PLEASE UPDATE SOON<3

lexvenelexvenealmost 13 years ago
cn i say absolutely great!!!!!!!!!!!!

***** n only cuz i cnt give it ten

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
love it

I loved it girl...I can't wait for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Super Job !!!

I love your stories PLEASE update soon . Love it. IT was so HOT when he said " I want to own you ". Love love it . More Please !!!!

darkfaerdarkfaerover 12 years ago
WHOA!!

I hope Alex can win her heart.

JikiaJikiaover 12 years ago
more

Love it can't wait for nxt installment

jussiejonesjussiejonesover 12 years ago
update?

Are you going to finish this?

SashasworldSashasworldover 12 years ago
Grr.

Finish. Please.

Alpha_MarmAlpha_Marmover 12 years ago
What did I say????? Just like I said!!!!!

Men seem to forget the bio-emotional imperative. Sex is a connector for them and they try to deny it every fuckin' time. I said someone would be screaming "uncle" and sho nuff!!! You can't fuck on the regular like that and NOT form an attachment...ain't happenin' luv. 'Nuff said.

mimi186mimi186almost 12 years ago
Alpha_marm you read my mind!!!

Completely agree!

brownskinnedcutiebrownskinnedcutiealmost 12 years ago

Alrighty then!!! Alex is feeling a little jealous, besides Bella it ain't cool to be dating while you fucking Alex. That would be skank nasty!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

You're seriously scant on physical descriptions. I have no idea on what these guys look like other than they are "cute" and that Alex is not muscular but toned which basically equates to sort of skinny in my visualisation. Please flesh out your descriptions. One needs to know hair shade, eye colour, height etc.

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