by rocketgirl2011
You're seriously scant on physical descriptions. I have no idea on what these guys look like other than they are "cute" and that Alex is not muscular but toned which basically equates to sort of skinny in my visualisation. Please flesh out your descriptions. One needs to know hair shade, eye colour, height etc.
Alrighty then!!! Alex is feeling a little jealous, besides Bella it ain't cool to be dating while you fucking Alex. That would be skank nasty!!!
Men seem to forget the bio-emotional imperative. Sex is a connector for them and they try to deny it every fuckin' time. I said someone would be screaming "uncle" and sho nuff!!! You can't fuck on the regular like that and NOT form an attachment...ain't happenin' luv. 'Nuff said.
I love your stories PLEASE update soon . Love it. IT was so HOT when he said " I want to own you ". Love love it . More Please !!!!
I LOVE THESE STORIES....update soon..lol
I know it takes me TO LONG TO update, but now i know how my readers feel...PLEASE UPDATE SOON<3
Normally I dont like these short clipped stories because I want the long winded Jane Eyre type interracial romances but since i'm short on time and sleep this is exactly what I need and can handle right now. I'm liking possesive Alex and I hope it continues in that vain. Cant wait to read your other stories...
love this story keep it up and keep it coming fast thank u lol
i knew someone would get caught up too. if a white man told me he wanted to own me, i think i would be put off too. actually nay men for that matter... but eh it's fiction. food read, but too short.
I knew someone would get caught up I just didn't think it would be Alex. I get the feeling Bella is going to find out if Rick is a better lay or not. If she does serves Alex right. He had gotten his payment every night and there agreement was for only 4 times a months. Alex's rules not Bella's...lmao
I agree it did get a little weird at the end overall it is still a good story but something is missing. If I can make a suggestion I think you should make Bella and Alex interact more than inside of the bedroom on a sexual level. I mean if she had been living there two weeks something had to change base on your writing, I mean if it was an arrangement why is he hurt all of a sudden? I think you need to expand on that a bit more.
Yeah......probably not the best move to call your "sexual employer" by the wrong name.
Good chapter!
Love it. I just hope Alex's sense of ownership is because he is starting to fell something for her. I like him but that would change with one read if he turns out to be a sick freak.