All Comments on 'A New Mind Ch. 02'

These are GREAT! I have no particular interest in panty hose, but I'm getting a kick out of the preoccupation this guy's town will now have on its hands. (I mean this as a credit to you, sir!) Surely he will lose control of the community he's exercising his control fetish on, but you aren't a predictable writer to me so I have no idea what you've got in mind, even though you've given us a little to speculate about.

You've done many things very well here - the alternating story lines, the freedom from inhibition, the seduction of power, and all of it is memorable, the pacing is great..

Very fresh, interesting story, with a big variety of teasing erotic possibilities zinging out in all directions!

I hope you will enjoy the story as it continues.

what about doing things with his daughter

I don't see the daughter or son being a part of this story other than background characters.

Thanks for the nice fantasies, well-written.

Great Story! You have a natural talent for this kind of thing. Can't wait to read chapter 3.

this story is so hot and i need to read more. please give us more

will be out soon, I have submitted it and now it goes through the approval process.

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