All Comments on 'A New PG-13 Action Movie'

by John Randolph

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Nope

This is a complete load of rubbish.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Lisa and Zed

will never see each other again and that is a good thing for her, because Zed would divorce her anyway. she is no longer anything but a selfish slut who only wants satisfaction and new adventures.. take it to erotic couplings or nonconsent

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
5! HEY ANNONY

Relax asshole or you're going to have a fucking heart attack. Hey never mid keep going and maybe we'll piss on your grave.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Simply awful writing

Regardless of subject matter this was poorly done on every level.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
re: anonymous-Hey Annony

Fuck off Bitch.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
I won't sign this one

3rd grader at best. Silly story idea, silly characters, slender with rippling muscles my ass. Cucks in the jungle this time. Maybe we'll get Cucked in Space next. This was beyond bad.

A Troll

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
What a bunch of crap!!

Dont read that crap its a waste of time!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Worst

Worst story since Miquel last posted. Simply bad in all areas.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
A little better than so-so.

Kind of a flimsy premise. In LW world any wife set upon by a worldly stranger succumbs to his skills and oversize dick (why don't these worldly strangers come in different sizes?) and becomes a sex maniac. It seems to be the writers are exposing their insecurities as men and lovers.

In the real world guys with outsize dicks have to deal with fear and rejection. Sex isn't fun for a girl who fears permanent damage from a huge cock.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
WHAT A LOAD OF SHIT

Publish some of your original stories which you have now taken down. some of those needed an edit, or ever a re-write, but the story lines were much better than your most recent ones.

iameaseliameaselabout 2 years ago

I do so hope you are somewhat less stupid than this story is.

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