All Comments on 'A Night to Remember.'

Good first story, but probably not LW!

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Well written and teasing some what.

What???? How does this equivocate the byline of what happened 20 years ago? This stuff goes on for years in a normal happy marriage. At least it wasn't a cuck story, for that alone I scored it a 3.

Good writing. Descriptive and erotic. Story line flowed well. Only it’s in the wrong category, should be in erotic coupling. Please write more as you seem to have the talent for it, but know that the LW category is a demanding place to start.

Don't write in present tense.

Very nice…..but not really a story, just an excerpt from what could be interesting.

Erotic coupling, or loving wife with hubby somewhere else?

No cuckolds here. Thank you. Just a good loving story.

Not bad.

You've a ways to go though.

Odoreater and his witless cum guzzling wonders will be upset that you dared have your first story a non-latent homosexual one.

Didn't know which category my story belonged in. Thank You for your feedback, I would love any help you can give me so that I can improve my writing.

Decent first effort, but it's really just a scene. Interesting from a "new writer's first work" perspective. 3/5.

Not a bad story at all. Like the cuck authors, put your story where you want it to be.

You should still wait another twenty or more years to post this one. Thought, I doubt it gonna age better. Just sayin‘

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Wow I really screwed up putting my story in LW. I've never read any stories in that category till today. I just saw Loving Wives and thought, "yeah that's what I am describing". Loving Wives to their husbands not cheating wives. Shout out to the owners of this site, change the name of the category to Cheating Wives, just saying.