All Comments on 'A Nude... Dealership? (Pt. 01)'

I really liked the concept and story, but I recommend doing more proof reading. It was distracting having to interpret all of the spelling errors and grammar mistakes.

God this story should be adapted to a Visual novel or film or something this is sexy as hell. I especially like Jessica being bottomless.

@junior6407 Thank you I will do more proofreading in the future.

@Bottomlesslover Anyone is welcome to take anything I’ve written and adapt it.

Good story. Keep writing author and make this a longer series.

Hermana means sister. Hija means daughter.

@Anonymous My sincere apologies. I will try to correct this.