All Comments on 'A Personal Ad'

It sounds like you are speaking from personal experience. You found a great dom couple to play with. Hope have many more.

Nice story, though it reads like a journal entry of a debriefing. Your style could use more 'show, don't tell.' Your style isn't necessarily bad, it's just a bit dry, but that's okay if that's what you are going for. You would do well to study simple guides on how to write dialogue, and proper punctuation.

Hi, Meg here I just wanted to say I appreciate the comments. I’d love to hear more from the person that described my story as journalistic. I get what your saying and I’d love to hear more of your thoughts. I truly want my stories to be fun to read and would love it if you would reach out to me.

And yes my stories are actual experiences

Thank you