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by Marshal1

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MormonJackMormonJack9 months ago

Interesting and fun. As is always the case, at various points during the story it's hard to keep things straight, but you did a fine job. Thank you!

Marshal1Marshal19 months agoAuthor

Thank you for the feedback. I try to keep things as straight forward as possible with a body swap time travel story. Lol we will see where pt 2 leads

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

A decent story

Master_DoctorMaster_Doctor7 months ago

Its very different, creative. But what does it have to do with Mind Control?

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Just a dude who likes stories Currently in the works: I am the ghost in your house Part 2. A picture is worth 3000 words / Dream Hopper / I am the ghost in your house cross over. - this one might be more than one story. Also the "I am a ghost in your house" part will be brief.