All Comments on 'A Place Beyond The Horizon Ch. 11'

I love this story, lots of human emotions conveyed in your writing, can’t wait for the next submission! 5 stars

Great storey love the emotions. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

You are painting yourself into a corner with no likeable characters.

I like this story and gave it a five. I have a comment about the Aidan character; perhaps his behavior results from being betrayed by the woman he adores. Regardless of the reason, he is so passive that he’s driving me up the wall. To use a worn out phrase, he is like a candle in the wind. He seems to have low control of his destiny.

How many total chapters in the story. I have been enjoying the adventure.

Ch 12 goes live this weekend, the pace begins to build from here, Ch 17 is the finale

I really like your continuation of the "Oxygen Games" series. Well done.

Personally I prefer character driving stories that explore love, lost and restoration of self. These series taken together are 5*