by SamYork
I really like your continuation of the "Oxygen Games" series. Well done.
Personally I prefer character driving stories that explore love, lost and restoration of self. These series taken together are 5*
Ch 12 goes live this weekend, the pace begins to build from here, Ch 17 is the finale
I like this story and gave it a five. I have a comment about the Aidan character; perhaps his behavior results from being betrayed by the woman he adores. Regardless of the reason, he is so passive that he’s driving me up the wall. To use a worn out phrase, he is like a candle in the wind. He seems to have low control of his destiny.
I love this story, lots of human emotions conveyed in your writing, can’t wait for the next submission! 5 stars