All Comments on 'A Place Beyond The Horizon Ch. 13'

Does Aidan have any idea what he is doing? He is like a lost puppy not sure where to go. He needs to wake up and take charge of his life. Looking forward to the next chapter.

This is a bunch of stupid ! it doesn't feel like a story. Like you're just stringing along your character and readers. 1*

@muskyboy thanks for the DM feedback - thought it would be good to respond in the story comments. This story is set in a larger context (see @oneagainst) dealing with Aidan's rudderless trainwreck of an existence after the actions of his wife, while will reach a resolution as part of the bigger story arc. Hopefully, the last 3 chapters reveal more for you.

Interesting, long on suspense. Where will you go with it? Very good read.

The degradation of Indi is extremely off-putting. That the other three apparently go along with it makes it worse.

Dump her now.