All Comments on 'A Pleasant Surprise Pt. 04'

Ellie definitely needs to top Tom. Just saying.

Wish I had started following this earlier. Now I have to go back and catch up.

This story is amazing , as Jess said don’t mess this up :-) .. I love where it is going great writing as well . Thank you so much …….x

Jess seems to be a good match for Josh. Just sayin'...

Consent is important, ladies and gentlemen. Ah yes, bigotry, knew that was coming. Doesn’t seem to matter for our main leads, though!

Can’t wait to see where things go from here!

Why is there always some self absorbed overly popular girl who just can’t help but being a grade A bitch. I always hated those queen bee whores who would try and duck their way up the popular jock pyramid thinking it would do them any good. They never realize that it is high school which amounts to nothing in the real world. The fun part is when they find that fact out at college or wherever their skanky ass lands. That’s when they whine about how nobody likes them and how unfair it is as they seemingly forget all the shit they shoveled on those that they considered beneath them. Karma is a bitch and so are those girls.

I am still loving the story and enjoy how easily the conversations flow which allows it to be followed without confusion.

Hope this story will continue, so far very pleasant

I'm liking it a lot and I have to say that I'm kinda picky about what I read.

I am truly enjoying this story. Thanks for sharing your talent! I'll probably finish the series today (maybe tomorrow).

One of the best Ive ever read and I read A LOT! Please dont let this be ur only story!!

Great story so far. Excited to see where it's going. I hope Ellie gets even more dominant. Thanks for your work!

Great story! Thanks!

I love the positive vibes and the way they work through their internal insecurities.