by siribrock
It's difficult to fall in love with a story when the author doesn't care enough about it to proofread for fourth grade-level punctuation and spelling gaffes.
@ previous anon, I couldn't say it better, the typos & lack of proofreading shred a decent content. How did this pass any inspection for minimum standard of spelling grammar & punctuation for this site? Struggling writers have sought my assistance on stories rejected here with less errors than this rough but appealing story. It's embarrassing to Literotica.
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I agree with previous comments. I couldn't get past the first few paragraphs because of the too numerous spelling and punctuation errors as well as wrong words. Story line had some promise, but, ....