All Comments on 'A Professor's Dream'

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WoodButcher57WoodButcher57over 15 years ago
A bit overboard

but cute.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
well...

great read but there were a lot of over used phrases like "love tunnel" and "nether lips"... the rest of your story is actually fairly classy, so eliminating them would probably lend the story a more sexy tone.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Fixes

Who is Angela?

Gripping, not griping.

Imminent, not eminent.

wildhunterwildhunterabout 2 years ago

WILD!

That is the only thing I can say- REALLY "WILD"

Great story

Keep writing OK?

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