All Comments on 'A Project for Bethany'

I really hope there's a follow up to this

A really good read, loved the build up. Hope there is more too come.

More please. It is a great story.

This is an amazing story! No critiques to offer at all, just a request for more please!

I agree with all the other comments Hope there will be a part 2. I don't know why we can not find more stories not with just this contents but written as well.

Please carry it on for 10 more chapters. Please just carry it on I like the dynamic and the scenario

Wonderfull story. I would love to read more about Bethany

Very hot writing you’ve shared with us here. Bravo!

That was crazy good. Love how their relationship escalated over time

Perfect description of giving in to submissive tendencies and fulfilling the desire to please your mistress. I was hard reading it and wished it was me over her knee!! Great job!

Very good. Let me know if she needs another tenant 😀

Atmosphere virtually perfect, tone 'built in trap' of sister's 'tattling' and conspiring with her friend - hence the humiliation/embarrassment component - I'm not into pain, other than perhaps a symbolic hand OTK, so tend to dial out descriptions of paddles, canes, etc. but the plot buildup was nicely paced. My kind of 'efficient porn' and with literate writing as most are not. Thank you.

Great premise.

Wonderfully written.

From my perspective it could have used more details when there were hands-on sexual activities between them.

Certainly more details of what went on when his cock was between her thighs during the spanking would have been nice.

Perhaps some acknowledgement on her part that he was enjoying the spanking and the rubbing of his cock on her thighs.

And perhaps some questioning about what parts of her interactions with clients/stud cocks that he heard through the wall were most exciting. And why.

Missing, potentially, were any material/extended handling of his cock and balls. And his ass. And not even a bit of touching his asshole to see his reaction/s.

Despite these 'lacks', it was so well written that I rated it five stars.

Delicious!

A very enjoyable story, liked the graduation of his duties as his submission increased . Thank you.

I think cleaning her up is back on the menu boys.

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Well, that leaves a wonderful. taste in you're mouth, no?

Super start, very nicely written.

Love the humiliation & control she has over Matty ;)

Men should always clean their messes!

A beautiful dominance and submission. Great groundwork for a new lifestyle. Matty has much to obey.

very nice, well-written and extremely hot

Really enjoyed this. Such a slow burn and yet I could not stop reading.

matty has many spankings to go with bethany. and so much to obey. he will be the submissive little cockslut bethany needs the sissyboy to become

Good premise.

Not nearly enough manipulation/playing/stroking his cock and balls.

Needed dialog during that. Needed instructions not to cum while she played with him.

Maybe even while she was entertaining in her adjacent room.

Maybe force him to describe to her what he iagined she was doing with her client/stunt cock.

Three stars.