by Pirlouit
Oh that was just brilliant, loved it. Definitely needs follow up chapters, I think there might even be a long turm romance between these two as well.
Way too rushed. It is not meant to be believable and that is fine but this just came across as comical at times.
I enjoyed reading this, even if it was a little far-fetched - but that’s why we largely come to Lit in the first place!
Lots of opportunities for a sequel or two
Fun little story. Great entertainment that I hope you continue for many more chapters. Cheers