All Comments on 'A Public Revenge'

by Pirlouit

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FailedscoutFailedscout11 months ago

Awesome story!

Thank you for writing and posting here.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Oh that was just brilliant, loved it. Definitely needs follow up chapters, I think there might even be a long turm romance between these two as well.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Way too rushed. It is not meant to be believable and that is fine but this just came across as comical at times.

Wiz1002Wiz100211 months ago

I enjoyed reading this, even if it was a little far-fetched - but that’s why we largely come to Lit in the first place!

Lots of opportunities for a sequel or two

Qwer12Qwer1211 months ago

Fun little story. Great entertainment that I hope you continue for many more chapters. Cheers

Tripper_DudeTripper_Dude7 months ago

Fun and exciting quick read.

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