All Comments on 'A Quean of Mixed Hearts'

GUESS WHOSE COMING TO BREAKFAST?! Kudos for a funny, way over the top story. With the exception of the death and destruction of the poor overworked cell phone, it was a fun VD day romp. I suppose it proves the point that you really can order absolutely anything on line today. Five stars.

Hahahaha that's such a great story. Thanks for the hilarious V-Day romp story

wow! I don't usually read these quick contest stories as they don't have a finish to them , but something caught my eye with this one and I am glad it did. With twist at the end was so funny. 5 stars all day long.

Great story! Could feel the protagonist's anxiety and conflicted feelings. The surprise ending was a bonus! 5 stars. Good luck in the contest.

That story is fucking hilarious!!!! I can relate, not exactly with unknowingly organizing an orgy, but being frazzle-brained from ADHD and forgetting things left, right and center. One downside of your writing, at least for me, ist the fact that you're writing in present tense. Maybe it's just that I'm not used to it, but it just...feels wrong to me.