All Comments on 'A Radical Antidepressant - Pt. 01'

by jklendcraw

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SpankerSamSpankerSamalmost 2 years ago

Good morning or whatever time frame you're in. I loved the buildup. The way you set it up was superb. I can't wait for the next parts.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

The negative build up is tedious. Please stop.

Tommyg200365Tommyg200365over 1 year ago

The spanking was excellent. But long long intro and we're waiting at the end.

jklendcrawjklendcrawover 1 year agoAuthor

I realize the build up/introduction is longer than people may be used to. It's an attempt to make this into more of an actual story, with some amount of foundation and character development, rather than just gratuitous "action". I know that's not for everyone, and I can respect that. In future stories (if they have similar build ups) I'll add a comment at the beginning warning of that, and try to make it still understandable if you skip to the "good stuff". Thanks for reading!

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