All Comments on 'A Relentless Teen Mistress Ch. 04'

I know this chapter is a bit odd, written first person as a set of emails. I wouldn't necessarily call it representative of my usual writing, but it's an experiment as I said. Comments are always welcome! Since it describes Chloe from Susannah's point of view, she might come across as more dominant than she might be in reality. Or maybe not! Personally I like Chapter 2 the most, and it stands alone, more or less.

Good creative try, but does not work for me.

Thanks for the feedback, jleetechie. It's always welcome. I might flesh it out someday, but at least it's a pretty quick read for now. So much to write, so little time!

Different style I like it but not all the time