All Comments on 'A Ring Named Ezzie Pt. 06'

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Avi_DreaderAvi_Dreaderover 2 years ago

Fabulous story, keep it coming One minor grammar issue to highlight is that poring should be used instead of pouring when referring to studying information.

Cheers

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Foursome with their moms please

ironmoose007ironmoose007over 2 years ago

I really like this story line. I agree he needs to come clean about Ezzie, and that is a chapter in its self. Wiil she be mad that he has manipulated her and her family?? What about Beth..? This could be his undoing... 5 stars for your story!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I was so glad when Essie gave him some attitude. He needed some reeling in. I think telling anyone about Essie is a huge mistake. It seems people never learn that sharing too much always bites you in the ass and he could risk losing it all but most of all, Karen’s trust and love.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I love the stories, but I really loved the chapter of walking in on the families swinging...wish you could include this couple in that...would be an awesome orgy!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

So well written - and so HOT - thoroughly deserves the 5*'s given

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