All Comments on 'A Ring Named Ezzie Pt. 26'

by ao1701e

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WhackdoodleWhackdoodleabout 1 year ago

Are you offering free lobotomies with this bullshit? Because that’s what it’s going to take to enjoy this shit. It stinks worse than a pig barn in 100F

ccs29745ccs29745about 1 year ago

This has been a great series going. Look forward to your next story or series. Keep up the great writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Very poor ending to a great series. It seems that you forgot about Ezzie. I suggest that you write an Epilogue to tye up all the loose ends.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

You need to continue. There is so much more to conquer.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This has been an incredible series, so loving but hot and sexy at the same time. Thank you, I look forward to your next project.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

The difference in this writing style is making the story difficult to read ... Most often the easier style is telling a story ... example ... "I see Karen light up and smile. "Ugh, they are in love." Says Joe. (SHOWING Style as in this story ... Rather than TELLING a story ... I SAW Karen light up and SMILED. "Ugh, they are in love," Joe SAID.

The story itself is not bad.

Redchemist14Redchemist1426 days ago

Very fun series to read! I appreciate how you grew as an author through the series as well. I look forward to reading the next generation!

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