All Comments on 'A Sexagenarians Fantasies Ch. 01'

And it started out quite well.

Then you had to go and destroy any vestige of believability.

You just had to make what, for me, is the ultimate, cardinal, sin!!

You tried to make out that the Reader is/was a participant when the Reader knows d*mn well that he/she was most definitely NOT!!

For me, half a star, but one is the smallest that registers!!

Only the first time!

It's only the beginning--a 5 star beginning to be sure but it cries out for a continuation.

I hope that will be forthcoming soon