All Comments on 'A Slave Trainer Ch. 01'

Please finish!!!!

I see from your biography that you are female and yet this story is told from a Dominant's point of view. I thoroughly enjoyed this first chapter. I have to assume that you are in a position of servitude and apparently you are doing your Dominant proud. your writing is superb. Descriptive but not to the point of boring. I hope you are allowed to continue this story, though it does stand well on it's own. 5 stars. Excellent first submission.

The story could be a winner, depending on the development of the new shipment, their training, their attempt to fight back, etc. If it is just one quick submission after another, that would be disappointing.

great story! please finish it!!

i can tell its already gonna be one of my favs!

Omg I'm so fucking wet. THIS IS GREAT