by HisSexKitten0908
great story! please finish it!!
i can tell its already gonna be one of my favs!
The story could be a winner, depending on the development of the new shipment, their training, their attempt to fight back, etc. If it is just one quick submission after another, that would be disappointing.
I see from your biography that you are female and yet this story is told from a Dominant's point of view. I thoroughly enjoyed this first chapter. I have to assume that you are in a position of servitude and apparently you are doing your Dominant proud. your writing is superb. Descriptive but not to the point of boring. I hope you are allowed to continue this story, though it does stand well on it's own. 5 stars. Excellent first submission.