by Bloke1
Great buildup, well set. You have your "heroin" all ways on tenterhooks, always wondering what "cums" next.
Well written and presented, I hope you have more to tell on this story!
I enjoyed this a lot - I hope you'll consider writing up her next adventures for us.
EXCELLENT!!! Just wish I had someone to do that to me, and someone who would dream up a story so good for me. :)
Very nice :) I love the idea of this happening to me. I liked the great detail and look forward to reading part two.
The unknown is truly exciting not knowing what
Is around the next cornor of life.she was unsure
Of herself but let go to find out that this
Was her place in life. I hope to be able
To read the rest . As she embarks on her
Adventure .
I enjoyed reading this story. I cannot wait to read part 2. This one had me on the edge of my seat at all times. Imagining what this would be like in real life. Very good job.
5 stars just isn't enough for this superbly written story. Can't wait for another chapter. My submissive girlfriend will love reading it This h as given m e an idea for a weekend getaway. Thank you.