All Comments on 'A Student's Brainwashing Ch. 02'

Good, but a bit too short. Everything feels a bit flat since we don't really see much of the character outside of the induction scenes. Of course, if the next dozen or so chapters flesh it out, that'd be great. Where's the conflict? How is the protagonist to be used? Will she become aware of her odd behavior? Will she be able to fight it?

short and sweet. unlike what Ferrumitzal said, I feel like this story is fine as is and doesnt really need extra chapters or additions. it would be cool if it did, but in no way needed, and sometimes short and sweet is all we need.