All Comments on 'A Succubus Awakens Ch. 02'

When's the next book coming

I really like the idea and the writing of this story. Gwen and Amy are super cute!

I'm working on Chapter 3 now. It's almost finished so I'd expect it within the next week depending on when it gets approved.

An enthralling and imaginative fun-filled fantasy! Also, quite erotic.

Developing slowly as we get to know the characters. Almost saddened that Amy is not in love with Gwen — maybe that would have too easy for this tale. Continue to enjoy the way you are crafting this story.

One of the most erotic kisses I've read in awhile. Beautifully done. But I'm liking the slow building of the world, of what's happening. This is a very entertaining story, with just the right amount of eroticism. Well done!

Ash, This is the first of your stories that I've read and I admire your work. You seem to be letting the story write itself, which is the best way to write IMHO. However, you might want to write the entire story out before submitting the first chapter. You may find details later on in the story that you've overlooked the first time. (That may sound like a contradiction with my second sentence, but it isn't - the story will still write itself. I look forward to reading more of this story and your other stories as well. Thank you for writing!

Beautifully written.

Nice characters and emotions. I'm looking forward to their adventures. I can already picture an arch nemesis and a potential ally (or is that the contrary?).

Well done.