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by MrPixel

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Boyd PercyBoyd Percy3 months ago

Love the horseflies and swatters!

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StrappySandalsStrappySandals3 months ago

Ha ha... I had no idea where that was going, but the 4- minute fuck in the middle of an eclipse was PERFECT, horse flies be damned!!

jhealy55jhealy553 months ago

Nicely done! Love the mix of humor and sexy outdoor fun!

WantingToWriteGoodWantingToWriteGood3 months ago

Very clever and original.

SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfun3 months ago

What a perfect way to enjoy the eclipse. Well Done!

RJDinNYRJDinNY3 months ago

Good story! I believe there is to be a total eclipse in the eastern US on Monday, May 8 in mid-day. Make your plans NOW!

Djmac1031Djmac10313 months ago

And everything under the sun is in tune,

But the sun is eclipsed by Steve's moon... šŸ˜†

SouthernCrossfireSouthernCrossfire2 months ago

Humorous story, MP, with some good misdirection early on and a nice surprise at the end.

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California natives far from home: she a spectacularly-preserved Scandiavian-heritage beauty, he a silver fox who let the way-too-big restaurant portions of Midwest food get the better of him (he's working on it!). Over thirty years together sharing a moderately spicy sex life ...